A man stands at the end of a red carpet. Waiting.
Pews line either side of the pathway, the aisle empty, the seats filled with friends
and family for this momentous day.
The ceremony begins, as do gentle flows of tears
as she floats down the aisle slowly.
It's time to move on. A new page has been turned, the rest of the book yet unread.
A black limo arrives, beckoning to
The two bodies, now one living.
They arrive at a place with overwhelming silent serenity.
He lays her down to rest, heart filled with emotion
as quiet peace engulfs them both.
Wedding?
Or
Funeral?
Saturday, March 21, 2009
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I don't feel like answering a trick question. . .
Ooh, a knew blogger theme!
Nice, Bon-Fire!
The way u wrote this it seems as though the beginning is like a wedding, but then it turns around and seems like a funeral. . .
~The Silhouette
Thanks, Render.
I always liked movies and books that twist something at the end so you go through the whole story thinking it's one way and then right at the end it's like "whoa" and you want to go back and re-read it with a new perspective. I wanted to try to do something like that.
ANYWAY
How's your writing coming?
so are you going to give an answer?? I don't know what it is.
How's MY writting?
Let's think about this. . .
Oh dat's right, all my work is on my unhandy computer. . .
I might try to post something with my iTouch. . .
Dat'll be F-U-N
Nvm. . .
I can't post stuff with me iTouch. . .
Render - well excuse me for replying before your computer crashed... when's it coming back, btw?
Kakiedoo - it's either one. :) Just a twist on perspective. You choose.
Will you write another post plz?
I want something to read. . .
*sheds a tear. Puppydog sad-face*
Sure; i feel like writing.
Just don't cry!
What do you want to read about?
If you want, write a three paragraph minimum short-story about Buttons becoming a knight!
. . .
Plz
Will you murder, injure, permanently scar, or throws cows at me if I go a bit over three paragraphs?
And, in return, can you write a story for me?
I have a good idea of what I'll write!
*Evil Grin*
I no care!
"Mine" strory might be a bit long, too.
I'll bet mine'll be longer.
*competitive raspberry*
Very profound and...um...a bit forboding?
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